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PostSubject: Ode to the Jelly-Filled Donut -- Ian Disch   Ode to the Jelly-Filled Donut -- Ian Disch I_icon_minitime4/1/2009, 3:49 am

Ode to the Jelly-Filled Donut

Dear heavenly Jelly-Filled Donut,
I have strayed from the path
of your sticky goodness.
Your gooey deliciousness
eludes me
as I move ever further
from you.
I long to be back
in your sugary rightness.
I strive to rediscover
your doughy perfection.
In jelly-Filled Donut's name,
Amen.


-Ian Disch
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PostSubject: Re: Ode to the Jelly-Filled Donut -- Ian Disch   Ode to the Jelly-Filled Donut -- Ian Disch I_icon_minitime4/1/2009, 4:18 am

I don't know why exactly, but the title of this makes me think of Full Metal Jacket ---- Jelly doughnuts!!

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Okay. nevermind.
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PostSubject: Re: Ode to the Jelly-Filled Donut -- Ian Disch   Ode to the Jelly-Filled Donut -- Ian Disch I_icon_minitime4/1/2009, 4:21 am

Haha, jelly donuts stashed in foot lockers and blanket parties?
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PostSubject: Re: Ode to the Jelly-Filled Donut -- Ian Disch   Ode to the Jelly-Filled Donut -- Ian Disch I_icon_minitime4/2/2009, 5:57 am

this is pretty good but when i read this it made me think of a jelly doughnut and how much i love to eat them Laughing but all in all i love your poetry..... it is wonderfully beautiful
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PostSubject: Re: Ode to the Jelly-Filled Donut -- Ian Disch   Ode to the Jelly-Filled Donut -- Ian Disch I_icon_minitime4/2/2009, 6:43 am

Thanks Very Happy I enjoy your poetry as well. You write about what is important to you and you write about it plainly. Not all poetry has to be a series of messages veiled behind metaphors and such. Keep up the good work, I look forward to reading more of your work. Now go enjoy a donut!
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oh i most definitely will :very happy:
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