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Posts : 16 Join date : 2009-03-27 Age : 38 Location : Columbia, TN
| Subject: Ode to the Jelly-Filled Donut -- Ian Disch 4/1/2009, 3:49 am | |
| Ode to the Jelly-Filled Donut
Dear heavenly Jelly-Filled Donut, I have strayed from the path of your sticky goodness. Your gooey deliciousness eludes me as I move ever further from you. I long to be back in your sugary rightness. I strive to rediscover your doughy perfection. In jelly-Filled Donut's name, Amen. -Ian Disch | |
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Smith
Posts : 5 Join date : 2009-03-27
| Subject: Re: Ode to the Jelly-Filled Donut -- Ian Disch 4/1/2009, 4:18 am | |
| I don't know why exactly, but the title of this makes me think of Full Metal Jacket ---- Jelly doughnuts!! Okay. nevermind. | |
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Posts : 16 Join date : 2009-03-27 Age : 38 Location : Columbia, TN
| Subject: Re: Ode to the Jelly-Filled Donut -- Ian Disch 4/1/2009, 4:21 am | |
| Haha, jelly donuts stashed in foot lockers and blanket parties? | |
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xxbellaitalianaxx
Posts : 10 Join date : 2009-04-01 Age : 34 Location : Brentwood, TN
| Subject: Re: Ode to the Jelly-Filled Donut -- Ian Disch 4/2/2009, 5:57 am | |
| this is pretty good but when i read this it made me think of a jelly doughnut and how much i love to eat them but all in all i love your poetry..... it is wonderfully beautiful | |
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Posts : 16 Join date : 2009-03-27 Age : 38 Location : Columbia, TN
| Subject: Re: Ode to the Jelly-Filled Donut -- Ian Disch 4/2/2009, 6:43 am | |
| Thanks I enjoy your poetry as well. You write about what is important to you and you write about it plainly. Not all poetry has to be a series of messages veiled behind metaphors and such. Keep up the good work, I look forward to reading more of your work. Now go enjoy a donut! | |
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xxbellaitalianaxx
Posts : 10 Join date : 2009-04-01 Age : 34 Location : Brentwood, TN
| Subject: Re: Ode to the Jelly-Filled Donut -- Ian Disch 4/2/2009, 7:12 am | |
| oh i most definitely will :very happy: | |
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